Machine LEON is told to clear the tree, but he finds himself interested in the animals sitting on top of it instead. A short story of eight thousand words.
such a rich, vast world established in so few words wow! you’re always so good at establishing atmosphere but this was phenomenal. this line alone from the very beginning not only got me hooked on the story but also gave me chills: “He spoke it into each and every clockwork of the unfinished twenty-fifth.” SO beautiful
it's sooo funny and so on brand for you to have your cutest character be an android who also probably has the most of what i can only call mental breakdowns of all your characters and the way you describe the scenery in this is so GORGEOUS to me even though they're only such short scenes really but they stand out so much! so good at establishing a world with so few words. a child of hans christian andersen fr
such a rich, vast world established in so few words wow! you’re always so good at establishing atmosphere but this was phenomenal. this line alone from the very beginning not only got me hooked on the story but also gave me chills: “He spoke it into each and every clockwork of the unfinished twenty-fifth.” SO beautiful
could be my allergies but this ➡ "a part in his head says memories, though he is unsure where that word comes from" ⬅ line made me tear up a bit.
I like how digital this reads, compared to the analog feeling Ur writing usually gives me. full of intention!
it's sooo funny and so on brand for you to have your cutest character be an android who also probably has the most of what i can only call mental breakdowns of all your characters and the way you describe the scenery in this is so GORGEOUS to me even though they're only such short scenes really but they stand out so much! so good at establishing a world with so few words. a child of hans christian andersen fr