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ria's avatar

such a rich, vast world established in so few words wow! you’re always so good at establishing atmosphere but this was phenomenal. this line alone from the very beginning not only got me hooked on the story but also gave me chills: “He spoke it into each and every clockwork of the unfinished twenty-fifth.” SO beautiful

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amr's avatar

could be my allergies but this ➡ "a part in his head says memories, though he is unsure where that word comes from" ⬅ line made me tear up a bit.

I like how digital this reads, compared to the analog feeling Ur writing usually gives me. full of intention!

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